假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom刚刚转入新的学校,感到一切都很陌生。他在邮件中向你询问如何尽快融入新环境。请你按照以下要点回信。

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摘要:   书面表达  假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom刚刚转入新的学校,感到一切都很陌生。他在邮件中向你询问如何尽快融入新环境。请你按照以下要点回信。  1.多跟同学交流沟通;

  第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)

  表示时间顺序:first of all; to begin/start with in the beginning

  firstly.... secondly .... lastly / finally/in the end

  表示并列或补充关系:what is more; besides, moreover, apart from;

  in addition, as well as;not only…but(also), meanwhile, in the meantime, some...some…others

  表示转折对比关系:but, however, although, though, yet, while

  on one hand…on the other hand ...,

  表示因果关系:because, as, therefore, as a result, as a consequence, consequently, thus

  连句成文,运用恰当的衔接词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,使句与句之间逻辑性更强、

  段与段之间结构清晰。

  【点睛】范文要点全面,结构清晰,层次分明,上下文连贯,在表达时用到了很多高级词汇,如have trouble doing…;fit in;communicate with;get to know;take part in;be good for;develop relationship;be faced with;offer sb. suggestions;be of help to 等;复杂句式的运用提升了文章层次,如it作形式主语句式的运用it might be a good idea for you to take part in more activities;定语从句的运用…which are good for developing friendly relationships;过去分词作状语的运用faced with some tough problems, you might ask your teachers等。

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