【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封回信。
【详解】第一步:
审题:回信提出建议
人称:第二人称
时态:一般现在时
结构:总分法,分三部分,第一部分写信目的,第二部分提出具体的建议,第三部分希望建议有帮助。
要点:
1.写信目的:得知Tom难以尽快融入新环境,给他提出一些建议
2.具体的建议
①多跟同学交流沟通
②积极参加学校活动
③向老师寻求帮助
3.希望建议对Tom有帮助
第二步:列提纲(重点词汇、短语)
have trouble doing…;fit in;helpful;communicate with;as much as possible;get to know;take part in;be good for ;develop relationship;be faced with;offer sb. suggestions;be of help to
第三步:连词成句
(1)I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in at your new school.
(1)Such problems are quite normal.
(3) The following suggestions may be helpful.
(4) You may need to communicate with your classmates as much as possible.
(5) You will get to know each other better.
(6) It might be a good idea for you to take part in more activities.
(7) These activities are good for developing friendly relationship.
(8) When you are faced with some tough problems you might ask your teachers.
(9)The teachers can usually offer you some sensible suggestions.
(10) I hope my advice will be of some help to you.
(11)If there is anything more I can do to help,please let me know.
根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型,注意时态和主谓一致问题。