短文改错Dear Mary, I would like to tell you everything about my trip.

短文改错
 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Mary,
       I would like to tell you everything about my trip. Yesterday it was sun and windy. I went to the park for a trip with my classmates. Since the park is far away, we took a bus to there. What beautiful the park was! We swam in the pool then played volleyball. We took a lot of food and eat it for lunch under a big tree. Then we listened to musics and had a rest. In the afternoon, we went fish and took lots of photos. We both had a very wonderful time in the park. 【答案】1.everything→something；2. sun→sunny；3. the→a；4.删去there前的 to；5. What→How；6.在pool后加and；7. eat→ate；8. musics→music；9.fish→fishing；10.both→all。
【解析】