短文改错.The high school life of three years have made me learn a lot of things. Among them teamwork is

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摘要: 短文改错.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
短文改错.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The high school life of three years have made me learn a lot of things. Among them teamwork is the most significantly for me. In fact, I didn’t realize its importance after I was elected monitor of my class. In the beginning, I did almost all the duties myself. However, other students cared little about class activity. As a consequence, I  tired out and depressed. Then I turned to my head teacher, whom advised me to cooperate with others. Thus I began to recognize the strengths at my classmates and managed to have everyone to play a role in class. It is working in teams instead of on my own which has freed me of trouble and made my work more efficient. Without teamwork, I wouldn’t have made such many achievements at school.
【答案】have→has
significantly→significant
after→until/before
activity→activities
I后面加was
whom→who
at→of
去掉to
which→that
such→so
【解析】
【分析】
本文是记叙文。讲述了作者高中时代的团队合作让自己受益匪浅。
【详解】第1处,考查主谓一致。主语是单数The high school life,谓语动词也要用单数。故have改成has 。
第2处,考查形容词。be动词后用形容词,故significantly改成significant。
第3处,考查状语从句连接词。句意是直到当班长才意识到….或在…之前没有意识到,表示直到…才not…until,或在…之前 before,故after改成until/before。
第4处,考查名词的数。班级活动有很多,要用名词复数,故activity改成activities。
第5处,考查系动词。表示我很累,累是形容词,前面要用be动词,故I后面加was。
第6处,考查定语从句关系词。分析句子结构可知,先行词为head teacher,指人,在定语从句中做主语,故引导词应为关系代词who,故whom改成who。
第7处,考查介词。表示所属关系用介词of,故at改成of。
第8处,考查动词用法。让某人做某事have somebody do something,故去掉to。
第9处,考查强调句。分析句子结构可知,it is +被强调结构+that,这里强调主语working in teams,故which改成that。
第10处,考查固定短语。表示“如此多的”用固定短语so many,故such改成so。
 
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