今天早上你目睹了一起事件(下图),你想以"Mother Stops Him"为题写一篇短文,向你校英语报社投稿。短文内容如下: 1. 描述亊件。 2. 发表你的想法。

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摘要: 今天早上你目睹了一起事件(下图),你想以"Mother Stops Him"为题写一篇短文,向你校英语报社投稿。短文内容如下:
1. 描述亊件。
2. 发表你的想法。

要求:
1.可以适当增加细节,以使

今天早上你目睹了一起事件(下图),你想以"Mother Stops Him"为题写一篇短文,向你校英语报社投稿。短文内容如下:
1. 描述亊件。
2. 发表你的想法。
 
要求:
1.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 
2.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
3. 100个词汇左右。
参考词汇:lift…up扶起, knock…down撞倒,trust信任
Mother Stops Him
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【答案】This morning, my mother took me to school. On the way, I saw a car knock an old man down and the car ran away. The old woman fell to the ground and could not move. I saw this situation and immediately went over to help the old man lift up, but my mother stopped me saying, "Don't lift him up, or he 'll say you hit him." But I think helping others is what we should do. That old woman will certainly appreciate me, so I trust that as long as everyone gives a little love, the world will become a better place.
【解析】
【详解】这是一篇看图作文,所给材料较为详细,逻辑清楚,我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。根据要点内容可知短语主要应用一般过去时态,主要是第一人称,句型以简单句为主。写作时要灵活运用,注意主谓一致,单词拼写正确。
【点睛】本文在写作中使用了很多固定句式,如:The old woman fell to the ground and could not move. I saw this situation and immediately went over to help the old man lift up。所以在学习中,我们应注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.

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