摘要： 假如你是假定你是李华，你最好的朋友Xiao Zhan最近吸烟上瘾，你想劝他戒烟。请用英语给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1.校园禁烟，吸烟的危害，特别是对青少年身心都有危害。 2. 假如你是假定你是李华，你最好的朋友Xiao Zhan最近吸烟上瘾，你想劝他戒烟。请用英语给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.校园禁烟，吸烟的危害，特别是对青少年身心都有危害。
2.戒烟的一些建议：制定戒烟计划，培养新兴趣、爱好…….
注意：1.词数80—100;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Xiao Zhan
Recently I've found you become addicted to cigarettes.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇应用文，给吸烟成瘾的朋友写一封信，信中应包括吸烟的危害以及戒烟的一些建议。
第一步：审题
【详解】
体裁：
应用文(建议信)
时态
：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主。
人称
：第一人称
要求
：1.描述吸烟的危害;
2.提出戒烟的一些建议;
3.表达祝愿。
第二步
become addicted to; remind sb to do; besides; does great harm to; be harmful to; in order to; quit smoking; make a detailed plan; develop new interests; give up smoking;look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. Recently I've found you become addicted to cigarettes.
2.As your best friend, I have to remind you to stop smoking.
3. Besides, you know smoking does great harm not only to our health but also to our mind, which is even more harmful to teenagers.
4. In order to quit smoking, here are some suggestions for you.
5. You'd better make a detailed plan and set a date when you are going to stop.
6. Develop new interests and spend your time learning what is meaningful.
7. I sincerely hope you could give up smoking. Looking forward to your reply.
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。注意要添加适当的连接词使得上下文意思连贯，在使用较简单的单词、句式的同时，也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型。
【点睛】该文全面概括了内容要点，文章结构清晰。先说明了吸烟的危害，其次给出了戒烟的一些建议，最后又表达了祝愿。另外，本文各个部分衔接自然，in oder to;besides等短语的使用，显示出作者能熟练使用半富的词汇的能力。同时灵活使用了which引导的定语从句which is even more harmful to teenagers. 宾语从句you could give up smoking.等高级句式。
