书面表达:为了庆祝建国70周年,你校成功举办了校园艺术节活动。请你给你的英国朋友Tony写封邮件,向他介绍艺术节的相关情况

02-04
摘要: 书面表达
假如你是李华,为了庆祝建国70周年,你校成功举办了校园艺术节活动。请你给你的英国朋友Tony写封邮件,向他介绍艺术节的相关情况,内容包括:
1.活动形式;
2.活动意义。
注意:1.
书面表达
假如你是李华,为了庆祝建国70周年,你校成功举办了校园艺术节活动。请你给你的英国朋友Tony写封邮件,向他介绍艺术节的相关情况,内容包括:
1.活动形式;
2.活动意义。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:建国70周年the 70th anniversary of the founding of China
Dear Tony,
_______________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tony,
I’m writing to tell you something about the Art Festival which was successfully held in our school.
The Art Festival was held with the aim of celebrating the 70th anniversary of the founding of China. In the festival, a variety of activities were held among students, such as a speech competition and performances with singing and dancing. Besides, there was a grand exhibition on traditional Chinese culture, on which some art works, related pictures and videos were exhibited.
This art festival enables us to know more about traditional Chinese culture and the great achievements our motherland has accomplished during the past seven decades. In the meanwhile, it also inspires us to work hard and make great contributions to our motherland.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇应用文写作。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知, 假如你是李华,为了庆祝建国70周年,你校成功举办了校园艺术节活动。请你给你的英国朋友Tony写封邮件,向他介绍艺术节的相关情况,内容包括:1.活动形式;2.活动意义。
第2步:根据写作要求, 确定关键词(组):the Art Festival(艺术节);the 70th anniversary of the founding of China(建国70周年);a variety of(各种各样的);art works(艺术作品);the great achievements(伟大成就)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时。
第4步:连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整, 语言规范, 语篇连贯, 词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式, 如I’m writing to tell you something about the Art Festival which was successfully held in our school.运用了定语从句;Besides, there was a grand exhibition on traditional Chinese culture, on which some art works, related pictures and videos were exhibited.运用倒装句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式, 显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明, 上下句转换自然, 为文章增色添彩。
 
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