假如你是红星中学高三学生李华,得知下周来自美国的交换生要来你校学习,现征集接待家庭。请你给交换生负责人Jim写一封信,申请成为接付家庭。 内容包括: 1. 表达意愿;

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摘要: 51.假如你是红星中学高三学生李华,得知下周来自美国的交换生要来你校学习,现征集接待家庭。请你给交换生负责人Jim写一封信,申请成为接付家庭。 内容包括:
1. 表达意愿;
2. 申请
51.假如你是红星中学高三学生李华,得知下周来自美国的交换生要来你校学习,现征集接待家庭。请你给交换生负责人Jim写一封信,申请成为接付家庭。 内容包括:
1. 表达意愿;
2. 申请理由;
3. 恳请获准。
注意:1. 词数不少于50;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m more than delighted to hear that the exchange student from America will come to study this winter vacation, and you are looking for the host family for them. I’m writing to apply for being a host family.
We can provide the exchange student a separated room and delicious Chinese food cooked by my mother, which could help him experience the native Chinese family life. Moreover, my parents are easygoing and good at English as well, so we can get along well with him. In addition, my house is next to our school, so we can walk to school. During the spare time, I would like to show him around the Forbidden City, which is a must-see place especially for those who come to Beijing for the first time. Or we can also enjoy Peking Opera in theatre.
It must be a good choice for the exchange student to stay with my family. I would appreciate it if you could offer me the opportunity. Thank you for your time and consideration. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本文为应用文。你是红星中学高三学生李华,得知下周来自美国的交换生要来你校学习,现征集接待家庭。请你给交换生负责人Jim写一封信,申请成为接待家庭。 内容包括:表达意愿;申请理由;恳请获准。
【详解】本文为书信本的应用文。书信体一般包括三个部分。第一部分叙述写信的目的,即写信申请成为交换生的家庭。第二部分叙述申请成为接待家庭的意愿及理由。最后恳请获准。本文的重点是第二部分叙述成为接待交换生的理由要充分。可从生活和学习两个方面入手。内容要真实,不能夸大其词。
【点睛】本文要点完整,结构合理,申请理由充分。本文中运用了许多高级词汇如more than ...; apply for; be easygoing and good at ...; as well,  get along well with ... ; would like to show him around; the Forbidden City; offer sb. the opportunity; look forward to;以及顺序连词 Moreover,... In addition,...等,不仅语言丰富,而且文章脉络清晰。另外,文章中句式灵活。其中的复合句最为灵活。如定语从句..., which could help him experience the native Chinese family life和I would like to show him around the Forbidden City, which is a must-see place especially for those who come to Beijing for the first time。并列句my parents are easygoing and good at English as well, so we can get along well with him和 my house is next to our school, so we can walk to school. Or we can also enjoy Peking Opera in theatre。文章中还运用了条件状语从句I would appreciate it if you could offer me the opportunity。因此本文是一篇不错的文章,体现了作者驾驶英语的能力。
 
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