摘要： 书面表达 假定你是高三学生李华。你的加拿大好友Peter发邮件说要来体验中国春节并询问你的寒假计划。请给他回一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 复习弱势科目; 2. 到敬老院(the 书面表达
假定你是高三学生李华。你的加拿大好友Peter发邮件说要来体验中国春节并询问你的寒假计划。请给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 复习弱势科目;
2. 到敬老院(the nursing home)参加志愿者活动;
3. 邀请他与你一起过春节。
注意：1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Peter,
How’s everything?
You asked me in your last e-mail about how to spend my winter holiday. Here’s my plan.
First, with the college entrance examination around the corner，I’d like to take advantage of the time to go over my physics which I’m a little bit weak at. Second，as a volunteer of our school, I’m going to a nursing home to do voluntary work with other volunteers. We are going to make dumplings with the elderly and celebrate the Spring Festival together. You told me you would come to China to experience the Chinese Spring Festival, so you are warmly welcome to our hometown to enjoy the Festival with us. Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本书面表达是一篇提纲类写作。要求以李华的名义用英语给加拿大好友Peter发一封邮件。
【详解】这是一篇电子邮件。假定你是高三学生李华。你的加拿大好友Peter发邮件说要来体验中国春节并询问你的寒假计划。请给他回一封邮件，内容包括：1. 复习弱势科目;2. 到敬老院(the nursing home)参加志愿者活动;3. 邀请他与你一起过春节。本作文中给出的要点比较简略，故需要自由发挥的地方较多。需要注意不要偏离文章中心。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合整个文章，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点睛】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。定语从句的使用：First, with the college entrance examination around the corner，I’d like to take advantage of the time to go over my physics which I’m a little bit weak at.宾语从句的使用：You told me you would come to China to experience the Chinese Spring Festival, so you are warmly welcome to our hometown to enjoy the Festival with us. Best wishes.
