目前,教育部提出要把足球纳入学校体育课程教学体系,作为体育课的必修内容。某英语报以 Popularization of Campus Football为题,向中学生征文。请你根据以下内容用英语写一篇短

04-05
摘要:   书面表达  目前,教育部提出要把足球纳入学校体育课程教学体系,作为体育课的必修内容。某英语报以 Popularization of Campus Football为题,向中学生征文。请你根据以下

  书面表达

  目前,教育部提出要把足球纳入学校体育课程教学体系,作为体育课的必修内容。某英语报以 Popularization of Campus Football为题,向中学生征文。请你根据以下内容用英语写一篇短文应征。内容 包括:

  1.足球进校园的意义;

  2.学校存在的问题(如场地,设施,师资等);

  3.你的看法。

  注意:

  1.词数100左右;

  2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

  3.短文的开头已给出,但不计入总词数。

  参考词汇:设施facility

  Popularization of Campus Football

  China's Ministry of Education has promoted popularization of campus football in schools.

  参考答案及解析:

  Popularization of Campus Football

  China's Ministry of Education has promoted popularization of campus football in schools. It is of great significance to popularize campus football. Firstly, football training in schools will help teenagers to build them up. Secondly, it will enable teenagers to lay a solid foundation of football at an early age.

  However, ahead of us lie some difficulties. At present, the majority of the schools in our country have no football facilities, like standard football fields. Also, qualified coaches are in great need.

  As far as I am concerned, in order to popularize campus football, I strongly advocate that we should make joint efforts to contribute to the youth football progress and tha! local governments should take effective measures to support the youth football development.

  解析:

  本文体裁为议论文,给出了写作要点,要求同学们根据各要点认真思考以写出具体内容:本文时态要以一 般现在时和一般将来时为主,人称应使用第一、第三人称。文中要恰当使用连接词使上下文连贯,适当使 用较复杂的句式和较高级的词汇,以提升文章档次。

  亮点:这篇范文要点齐全,论证合理,观点明确,行文连贯,各种句型使用恰当,并适当地运用了一些较为高级 的词汇和较复杂的句式,起到了锦上添花的效果,如it作形式主语;倒装句"However, ahead of us lie some difficulties" LU及主从复合句等;使用较高级的词汇,如 significance, foundation , qualified , advocate, contribute to等。这些句式和词汇的使用,使得文章语言丰富多彩,令人耳目一新。

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