请仔细阅读以下三幅图片《三代农夫》(Three Generations of Farmers)并完成写作。

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摘要: Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
请仔细阅读以下三幅图片《三代农夫》(Three Ge

【分析】
本篇书面表达属于图画作文。根据题中所提供的三幅图片《三代农夫》(Three Generations of Farmers)完成写作。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:图画作文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1)简要描述三幅图片中的内容;
2)分析其背后所反映的现象及原因;
3) 对你的启示。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
Fifty years ago;In fact;promote the modernization of agriculture;a series of measures;responsibilities for agriculture;be filled with
第三步:连词成句
1. Thirty years ago, my parents used small walking tractors in their fields.
2. In fact, in recent years, China has promoted the modernization of agriculture through a series of measures such as the rural revitalization strategy.
3. Today, farmers use large tractors and plant protection drones.
4. Looking at the work of three generations I am filled with emotion.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)(仅供参考)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] Today, farmers use large tractors and plant protection drones.(运用现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] The past two generations' glorious retirement will be recorded in the history, remembering the struggle and prosperity of Chinese farmers who persevered, innovated and pursued progress.(运用关系代词who引导定语从句)

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