假定你是高三学生李华。你感到新作文题型——读后续写（extended writing）很具挑战性。请给外教 Mike 写一封信，咨询他的建议。

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摘要： 　　假定你是高三学生李华。你感到新作文题型——读后续写(extended writing)很具挑战性。请给外教Mike 写一封信，咨询他的建议。　　内容包括：　　1. 写信原因;　

第四步：连句成篇

　　1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

　　2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

　　3.表转折对比关系：while, meanwhile, However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

　　4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

　　连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

　　第五步：润色修改

　　【点睛】文章结构合理，思路清晰，使用了恰当的连接词及词组使行文连贯，如“While，and”，也运用了一些高级词汇和表达，如“advice;require;reasonable;incomplete;multiple;creativity;plot;accurately”以及状语从句“While I enjoy the creativity of this task, I find it challenging to identify the plot points of interest and to give my version the best possible ending.”等，增加了文章的亮点，体现了学生较高的英语学科素养。