摘要： 书面表达高中生的年龄是一个充满美好和遐想的年龄，每位高中生都对自己的将来有着美好的期待。请以“What will I be like in ten years”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：My major will be traditional Chinese medicinal science which I have been caring for, and I will devote myself to curing the sick and the development of the very science.这句话运用了关系代词which引导的定语从句；使用了一些固定词组，如devote oneself to; in one’s spare time; make friends with sb.等，另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
