假定你是李华,计划组织一次郊游,请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括: 1. 参加者; 2. 时间、地点;

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摘要:   假定你是李华,计划组织一次郊游,请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:  1. 参加者;  2. 时间、地点;  3. 活动:登山、野餐等。  注意:1. 词数80左右;

  假定你是李华,计划组织一次郊游,请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:

  1. 参加者;

  2. 时间、地点;

  3. 活动:登山、野餐等。

  注意:1. 词数80左右;

  2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

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  【答案】

Dear Chris,

  How are you doing? I am writing to invite you to a tour to the Green Hill this Saturday. As planned, we will leave by bus at 7:00 am at the school gate. About two hours will be spent climbing the mountain. After that we will have a picnic by the lake at the foot of the mountain.

  Up till now, 3 boys and 4 girls have joined the team. I do hope that you could join us because Green Hill is such a fun place to relax and surely we will have a great time. However, if you don't have spare time for this trip, it is fine. It's just up to you.

  Looking forward to hearing from you.

  Yours,

  Li Hua

  【解析】 本应用文贴近学生实际生活,虽然是命题作文,但还是保持一定的开放程度,形式是邮件,符合当今人们常见的信息交流方式。考生需要认真谋篇,紧扣提示,准确全面地表达所要求的内容,在合适的地方拓展细节,使行文连贯。作为邀请信,要求语言得体,邀请的语气诚恳,有礼貌。时态可以用一般现在时和一般将来时。人称以第一人称为主,第二人称为辅。

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