阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。 One fall,my wife Elli and I had a single goal:to photograph polar bea

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摘要: 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
One fall,my wife Elli and I had a single goal:to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research c
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事
One fall,my wife Elli and I had a single goal:to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “the polar bear capital of the world”-the town of Churchill in Manitoba,Canada.
Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears-like all wild animals-should be photographed from a safe distance. When I'm face to face with a polar bear,I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes,that is easier said than done. This was one of those times.
As Elli and I cooked dinner,a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed,and smelled our garlic bread.
The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp,which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.
Terrified,Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear,hit pots hard,and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though-he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws(爪子).
I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way,but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter(相遇),I took some pictures of the bear.
Elli and I feared the fence wouldn't last through 30 more minutes of the bear's punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears' eyes,but doesn't hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and,through the fence,sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar(吼叫),the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.
注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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【参考范文
 Paragraph 1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. He exposed his sharp teeth, glaring at us as he ran forward. And again the bear stood on his back legs, wanting to snap at the fence like a monster. It seemed that his mouth was full of blood and his eyes were red with anger. Seeing such terrible sight, I could feel a coldness flooding from my back. Ellis was stunned there, with the mouth widely open. I had to take action, so I picked my courage and tried to frighten him away with the pepper spray, but finally failed.
Paragraph 2: At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. It landed near our camp and its loud noises scared the bear. He looked irritated and charged at us again. I cried out, “Watch out!”  We instantly stepped away and ran as fast as we could to the helicopter. Thank My God! We succeeded in climbing onto to the helicopter, gasping with relief. Looking down at the bear, we found that he was eating the bread we just made. Several hours later, we arrived at home safe and sound, but we realized that we should do something to help the bears.
【解析】
读后续写作为新题型之一,突出考查了考生根据所获得的综合信息,吸收,内化并转变成自我语言的一种能力,同时通过对文本结构的分析和合理性地推测与想象,用自己的语言接续文本,体现了核心素养中的思维品质和语言能力。读后续写是对原文的阅读,然后进行“狗尾续貂”,在写作时,要注意“三个读”:先读原文,了解文章的大意,主旨,文章逻辑结构,故事的6要素,情节发展等等;第二读要注意10个关键词,对关键词进行合理地分类,确定哪些是最重要的词,哪些次之,然后构思合理的使用;第三读要注意读给出的两个首句,确定全文结尾的逻辑关系。与此同时,也要注意字数的安排,控制在150+20左右,建议两段的长短均匀为宜。
 
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