摘要： 假如你是李华，寒假即将来临，你的美国笔友Paul计划前往中国旅游，并写信向你询问旅行建议，请你给他写封回信，要点包括：1. 推荐旅行目的地，并说明理由；
2. 提醒旅行注意事项（如提前学习
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给即将到中国旅游的美国笔友Paul回信给他一些在中国旅行的建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 推荐旅行目的地，并说明理由；
2. 提醒旅行注意事项（如提前学习一些简单中文等）。
第二步：列提纲（重点词汇）
pay a visit to; advice; as far as I am concerned; capital; list;traveling destinations; recognized as; seven wonders of the world; must-go; besides; admire; unique; architecture;suitable choice; what’s more;in advance; tourists; peak season; end； necessary; basic Chinese;so that; communicate; guide; safe ; pleasant.
第三步：连词成句
1.Hearing that you will pay a visit to China during the winter holiday, I'm writing to give you some advice.
2.As far as I’m concerned, it is the capital city Beijing that has got to be in the list of your traveling destinations.
3.The Great Wall, recognized as one of the seven wonders of the world, is a must-go place in Beijing.
4.Besides, taking a walk around the Forbidden city where you can admire the unique architecture is also a suitable choice.
5.What’s more, you'd better book a hotel room in advance since there are lots of tourists in Beijing during the peak season.
6.In the end, I find it necessary to learn to speak some basic Chinese so that you can communicate easily there.
7.If possible, I’m willing to act as your guide.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致与时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：Besides, what’s more.
2.表文章结构顺序：In the end.
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范。
【点睛】[高分句型1]As far as I’m concerned, it is the capital city Beijing that has got to be in the list of your traveling destinations. (使用了it + be + 被强调部分 + that+其余部分的强调句式。)
[高分句型2]Besides, taking a walk around the Forbidden city where you can admire the unique architecture is also a suitable choice. (使用了where引导的定语从句。)
[高分句型3]In the end, I find it necessary to learn to speak some basic Chinese so that you can communicate easily there.(使用了so that 引导的目的状语从句。)
