摘要： 读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为 150 左右。
The event that stands out in Tom's memory happene
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Tom noticed the flame was reaching up. Frozen with fear, he stood rooted to the spot and held Jane's hand tightly. Both of them were coughing heavily. Time seemed to stand still, though they were probably there for only two or three minutes. Tom begged Jane to run for safety as quickly as possible. Jane tried to protect her nose from the choking smoke and shook her head. She hit against the door again and again.
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Luckily, some neighbors passing by stopped and offered help. A sense of strength immediately replaced the fear and anxiety in Jane's mind. She told them Ms. Makcik must be still in the room. They forced the door open with all their strength. Sure enough, Makcik was inside the room, lying in bed, unconscious. She was carried downstairs and then rushed to the hospital, where she finally came to herself. People in the neighborhood felt relieved and Jane and Tom were very happy.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇读后续写作文。
【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知，文章主要记叙了Tom和姐姐Jane在家时，楼下摩托车店突然失火。他们冲出门，穿过浓烟，穿过走廊。Jane突然想起了住在他们隔壁的一位70多岁的老太太，想要告诉她让她逃生。
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：Tom注意到火焰正在上升。所以后文应该是讲述火烧上来后他们的反应，Tom吓呆了，像生了根似的站在原地，紧紧地抓住Jane的手，他们两个都咳嗽得很厉害。Jane还是坚持撞门。第二段开头是：幸运的是，一些路过的邻居停下来提供帮助。本段应该写他们和邻居一起救出了老太太的经过。
最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。
【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：both of, for safety, as quickly as possible等高级词汇；让步状语从句Time seemed to stand still, though they were probably there for only two or three minutes.；定语从句She was carried downstairs and then rushed to the hospital, where she finally came to herself.等高级句式。
