摘要： 读后续写。阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为100左右。
Two men, both seriously ill, occupied the same hospita
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The other man asked if he could be moved next to the window. The nurse was happy to make the switch, and after making sure he was comfortable, she left him alone. He supported himself up on one elbow to take his first look at the real world outside. He slowly turned to look out of the window beside the bed. To his surprise, it faced a blank wall.
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Later the man asked the nurse why his roommate described such wonderful things. The nurse responded that the man was blind and perhaps he described the beautiful scene outside the window just to encourage him. There is great happiness in making others happy, despite our own situations. Shared grief is half the sorrow, but happiness when shared, is doubled.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇读后续写作文。
【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知，文章讲述了两个病重的男人住在同一间病房，一个的人被允许每天下午在床上坐一个小时，帮助排出肺部的液体。他的床紧挨着房间里唯一的窗户。另一个人则不得不整天平躺着。每天挨着窗户的人都会给躺着的人描述窗外的世界，那个人听着也很高兴。后来那个靠窗的人去世了。
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：另一个人问他是否可以搬到窗边去。所以后文应该是讲述那个人搬到窗边后的事情，令他吃惊的是，窗外是一堵空白的墙。第二段开头是：后来这个人问护士为什么他的室友描述了这些美妙的东西。本段应该写那个人看到窗外是墙之后的反应，当他问护士是什么促使他已故的室友描述窗外的美好事物时，护士回答说，这个人是盲人，也许他描述窗外的美丽景色只是为了鼓励他。让别人快乐是一种巨大的快乐，不管我们自己的处境如何。与人分享悲伤是悲伤的一半，而与人分享快乐则是悲伤的两倍。
最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为100左右。
【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：make the switch，leave alone，to one’s surprise等高级词汇；The nurse was happy to make the switch, and after making sure he was comfortable, she left him alone. 非谓语动词的运用；The nurse responded that the man was blind and perhaps he described the beautiful scene outside the window just to encourage him.运用了宾语从句等高级句式。
