摘要： 假定你是校学生会主席李华，你校交换生Peter在校乒乓球比赛中取得了第二名的好成绩。请你给他写一封电子邮件表示祝贺，内容包括： 1.写信目的; 2.肯定其付出。 注意 本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封祝贺信。
第一步：
审题：邮件祝贺Peter在校乒乓球比赛中取得了第二名的好成绩。
人称：第二、三人称
时态：一般现在时、一般过去时
结构：总分法，分两部分，第一部分说明写信的目的——表示祝贺，第二部分肯定Peter在平时训练中的努力和付出。
要点：
1. 说明写信的目的——表示祝贺
2.肯定Peter在平时训练中的努力和付出
①Peter艰苦的努力和经常练习导致他的成功
②鼓励Peter继续努力
第二步：列提纲(重点词汇、短语)
exciting news;win the second prize;hold;convey;congratulations;pains-taking effort;contribute to;remarkable success;play the table tennis;competition;be convinced;make it;keep fighting
第三步：连词成句
(1)It is exciting news.
(2) You have won the second prize in the Ping-pong Match held in our school last week!
(3)I'm writing to convey my heart-felt congratulations to you.
(4)As the old saying goes, “God helps those who help themselves.”
(5) Your pains-taking effort and constant practice contribute to your remarkable success.
(6) I saw you playing the table tennis day after day before the competition.
(7) I was convinced that you would make it.
(8)It won't be the last prize you gain.
(9)Keep fighting and moving!
根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。
第四步：连句成篇(衔接词、亮点词汇)
用感叹句形式连接下面两个句子
(1)It is exciting news.
(2) You have won the second prize in the Ping-pong Match held in our school last week!
→What exciting news(it is)that you have won the second prize in the Ping-pong Match held in our school last week!
用强调句型表达下面的句子(强调主语)
(5) Your pains-taking effort and constant practice contribute to your remarkable success.
→It is your pains-taking effort and constant practice that contribute to your remarkable success.
(6) I saw you playing the table tennis day after day before the competition.
(7) I was convinced that you would make it.
→Seeing you playing the table tennis day after day before the competition, I was convinced that you would make it.
适当地运用高级词汇、复杂句式提升文章的档次，增加文章的可读性。
【点睛】
范文要点全面，结构清晰，层次分明，上下文连贯，在表达时用到了很多高级词汇，如win the second prize;convey;congratulations;pains-taking effort;contribute to;remarkable success;competition;be convinced;make it;keep fighting 等;复杂句式的运用提升了文章层次，如感叹句的运用，增加了感情色彩What exciting news that you have won the second prize…;俗语的运用As the old saying goes, “God helps those who help themselves.” ;强调句型的运用It is your pains-taking effort and constant practice that contribute to your remarkable success;现在分词作状语的运用Seeing you playing the table tennis day after day before the competition…等。
